I personnaly think Lillie is a little in love with our tortured and scorched Crusader…

Meta-roleplaying?

You get comments like ‘That was cool’ and sometimes you get other players of that game chiming in.

They are enjoyed by a mostly silent group that like to see a setting they like see more love… or by people looking for ideas.

You can also comment on the literature ploy or style used in it (conscious or unconscious from my part). In this entry I used the flashback ploy to hook the reader in a moment of high emotional value and tickle their curiosity in reading the rest. Did you find it well done? Would you have seen it otherwise.

There is a multitude of way you can tell the same story. Understanding what was successful from the rest is what make for a better story moving forward.

The way I see it this kind of writing thrives on feedback and although I enjoy reading the entries, I rarely find any noteworthy comments to make…

The players have started interacting with and joining organizations. they are also making ‘enemies’

This campaign, although still very young, feels very much alive and you can feel the players bonding to their characters…

I really like what Yan does (with a bit of editorial meddling on my part) with Lillie’s journal. It shows the game through the eyes of this worldly-but naive Fey that really, really, really wants to fit in the humanoid world.

Good job Yan!